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5月19日

qualcosa di buono esce sempre..(assegno inglese della del vecchio)

scriv una poesia di almeno 8 versi in rima con un'allitterazione un'assonanza una similitudine una metafora una personificazione e almeno la presenza di due sensi...
 
cosa ne è uscito?
 

The importance of the childhood or The song of the adults

 

My little and innocent child,

With your blond hair and eyes of sky

Looking you make me feel so wild,

And suddenly I realize I’ve lost my time.

 

So I’m hungry, because of that,

Look! I’m now a dark vampire,

And I jure I’ll live of your breath,

 sucking the blood of your pure empire.

 

 

Oh, no! dear child of mine,

 don’t run away

I want you to stay

‘cause only with you I’ll be fine

 

 

Thanks to you this fearful life I still stand

Hearing your crystalline laugh

I’ll return to my memories land and

I’ll notice this time is never enough

 

You’re so lucky, and you don’t know!

Smell your age’s delight

All this is going to go

It will disappear, at the first sunlight.

Oh, no! dear child of mine,

 don’t run away

I want you to stay

‘cause only with you I’ll be fine

 

But now, you can’t play or sing

You must fight if you want to endure

Your innocence is vanishing

‘cause You’re no more so pure

 

And now I’ve infected you

It’s just the dawning of the hell

Just find another child or more few

Suck their hoar and you’ll fell well

 

 

Oh, no! dear child of mine,

 don’t run away

I want you to stay

‘cause only with you I’ll be fine

 

 

Of the childhood I’m the elated murder

 And As me you’ve now lost your peace

Don’t try to put the present in order

 Don’t ask me : How did it come to this?

 

18/05/09

exelent

 

perchè cazzo quando mi gira mi viene anche la vena poetica..

anche se non piace a tutti..

nun m n fott pop

 

full stop .

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